Wednesday, December 3, 2008

Second Paragraph of the "Dreamers" Essay

Amita Bose
Mr. Salsich
English 8
December 2, 2008
Dreaming of My Home:
An Essay about the Poem "Dreamers" by Siegfried Sassoon
TS Just like the soldiers in the war, I would yearn for many parts of my daily life that I sacrificed to protect and fight for my country. SD One of the things I would mourn for the loss of would be my friends. CM My friends are always there for my in the darkest of times, and stand by me, no matter what happens. CM If I were fighting in midst of a perilous, arduous war, I would feel forlorn without my friends to keep my spirits up. SD Also, I would miss having time to rest if I were fighting in a war. CM Even though I may feel exhausted during the school week, I know that I only have to wait a few more days until I can sleep late, laze around the house, and spend my time leisurely. CM If I were in a war, I would never get any time to relax, because I would always need to be ready and alert for the next twist of events. CS If I left my hometown to fight in hazardous conditions, on the other side of the world, I would miss some parts of my life with all my heart.

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